by lexi Aug 3, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
The world keeps bringing me down it takes me along with its twists and turns, it feels like i'm in the water drowning peacefully like i'm just going down and no one is willing to lend a hand. Now i see a light, i go toward it, and there's a hand reaching out. i'm to scared to grab on, afraid only to end up back here again.... but i grab and i'm back up. I thought the world was bringing me down but a minute ago i would'nt have reached out and grabbed.... The world was'nt bringing me down just teaching me how to reach.... |
by ECILA ice
Like the content of this one just arrange to look more presentable and in a way of how poems were written... the flow went down a bit in the end, but the message were great. Keep it up. by the way thanx for the comment. |
Wow, very beautiful! Great job! Love this poem! |