by Twisted Heart Aug 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
On dusty shelf in darkness rests |
I love the story you have here. I like how you repeated Emerald Eyes at the end of each stanza. Nice work. |
by Mr M
Again slightly rough (sorry, I'm an editor so I'm one of thoseeee..) but a very good poem...still highest marks. |