Ok, as i read this poem beside that tears fell on my checks remebering those time that same thing happen to me, i can picture a very beautiful person, beautiful in heart, who has betrayed by her friends, and honestly that is the worst pain that a person can go through, cause it really hurt when someone of your own dont care.

as far as the poem go, truly this is one of the best poem, as it hold true emotion and feelings,
keep up the great work dear, cause you are great. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

It's a very emotional poem, very good.
Nicely put and simply, although the 3rd stanza was a bit bland. And the rhyme is a bit shaky if you say it out loud, but I love the rest of the poem. I especially adore the first stanza, the rhymes were hit hard and flow very smoothly, and it practically gives the whole story right there.

4/5

Hya, i really took to this poem and it really sadened me because i know what you mean.
You commented on one of my poems and said 'i hope it wasn't you , you was talking about but unfortunatly it was.
All ov my poems are about me unless it says otherwise.
This poems brought tears to my eyes as it made me think back and i want what you want in your last verse ! 5/5
Take care
XxX XxX

Omg
im crying
that is excatly how i feel
right now

How has the past been? Evil, cruel, horrid, spiteful? all of the above? doesn't matter your poem was fantastic anyway. most of your poems are:~)Sam