Very nicely written. I enjoyed the emotions you set throughout the poem itself.. Good job keep it up.. 5/5

Okay....this piece was amazing! I have tons of poems on this subject so I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love your wording and imagery...wish you'd share a gleam of how you do it with me!
5/5 ...
Charisma*

I loved this poem. I thought it said so much of what others fail to see when their love isn't returned...that we have the ability to move on. It did seem just a bit rough to read because of punctuation and some minor word usage but still high mark from me.

Beautiful poem.
Very touching.
Great piece of writing.
Loved reading it.
Take care

If only I could say those words to the one I love.. would he understand them..? Would he know that his love was misspent, when he could love me for less.. Beautiful.. I also love the stanza that Billy Rob highlighted, but in contrast, it works well because of the whole poem.. Very well done, as always. xx