Awww how sad but great poem hope its not true=]

* $heila *

The word choice is simple yet effective, the flow is flawless, the emtion is again strong, the message crystal clear, perfectly penned once again 5/5

Oh how sad!! but u've done a great job! i was carried away by the emotion nice one

Aww this is sad....really sad... but you did a great job expressing yourself through this poem...the flow and rhyming were perfect.

5/5.

This one is so touching and filled with emotions in every stanza. It is short but well written with really good flow.