by Dan Aug 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Grade 3 it was, when my first crush walked in, her charms attracting all the boys. She was brunette, her name was Shenae. She had dark brown eyes, deep and mystifying. We stopped and stared, as she walked to the front. Her voice was light and sweet. She told us about herself, and nobody heard her. Eying her up and down, the boys all hurried to welcome her. And so entered the primary school queen. She had 3 boyfriends before primary ended. She was smart and funny, and a really nice girl. It almost pained me to see what she became... But I let her be, cause my crush disolved. She just mixed in and became one of many. We never got on, she was a bit of a brat. Good riddance, I thought when that guy kissed her lips. |
by nikki
It was so sad. but i loved the way you started it as if it was gonna end happily, but you turned it and made it abit sad. it was beautiful. great description of her as well. 5/5 |