Encouraging your writing and your style of expressions.... well done... |
Thats a fine one indeed... 5/5 |
Yet another sweet poem..... keep up the best writing as well as its expressions.. |
Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5 |
by Maziyah
Emotions filled in it. (: thanks for the comment and this poem is good. ;) |
HonestlY speakinG, i luV thE stylE oF yR writingS N therE iS a speciaL outlooK... keeP uP yR writinG... i likE iT... 5/5 |
VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5 |
by Mack Bopape
More emotions have been put to this poem, Things might real went against you before, anyway this is nice i like it. |
by Nula
This is a nice poem i really like it |
This is really great. |
by SeCrEt WiSh
I wish there were more people in the world like you...the world is so cold.. "You birth alone to face a life to struggle" this line really struck me...it made me realize how true that statement really is. |
This poem is VERY wonderful |
by SeCrEt WiSh
Awww... This is really sad, I loved the meaning, you really captured the emotion, keep up the good work!! =] |