Wow. i thought it was awesome. it was a greatly written piece. nice work. 5/5.
my fave lines were
Eternal hate
Fighting for fate

loved it. it really stuck in my mind.

thanks for the r/r/c on mine. it was a delight to read your.

I absolutly loved it...perfect picture in my mind...verry well done...5!!

5/5 excellent poem...interesting to read, interesting to see a rhyming pattern. keep it up

Omg, I absolutely loved this poem.. you have no idea! It all rhymed and it all made sense.. two immortals fighting to the death even though no one will win but they won't give up. I think it was fantastic, such a great job and I loved every single line of it!! Keep up the excellent work.. tell me if you need something else commented on. 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

Wow that was great I liked how it all rymed 4 outta 5 :)

Hi.. i've read this one while you and cursedlies where still working on this one and i already admire it..It was really awesome..the imagination, flow and the emotions. over all a perfect art of your heart..Keep it up