OMFG!
How could u not tell mi u had new 1!
honestly i hv 2 sai dis is the greatest poem i hv read in a long....... time! you have the power to use words as a weaponn and not guns as those who are cowards would. remember power never empowers it only breaks you but to have a way with words and have the power to change for the better is something totally different that power is what the world needs to heal the wounds to wat society and the evils in our world have created.
I luv it! n ILY!
Happi b'day!

Makaveli
Excellent job on this piece. Very thought provoking.
Take Care Cindy

You've said it all, what else can I say, great job.

Good poem, i take it this is a dig at the australian government :P lol

This is a great poem. It really makes you stop and think about society! 5/5

Wow, amazing topic and this one has excellent message. It is very true and you wrote it superbly, atmosphere is also good and your wording is great.
Well done! This one deserves 5/5

When I first read this, I thought it didn't sound like a poem. But then I realized that it just added to the effect. This is a beautifully written, very thought-provoking poem. Every line is true. Great job.

This is by far my most favorite !! such truth in twisted words

Well done!
Jessi