It's what you do to me,
That drives me crazy,
That sets me free.
A thousand miles seems pretty far,
& they've got planes, and trains, and cars,
But I'd walk to you if I had no other way,
I'd do this each and every day.
Your smile awakens my soul,
It makes me dance,
It makes me whole,
Your voice,
The smell of your skin,
You can get me through thick and thin.
You're amazing,
Sexy,
And true,
You have me obsessing,
I want to fall for you.
I don't want to loose you,
Or be without you for a minuet,
I've opened my heart,
And I'm asking you to get in it... <3 .
It's what you do to me,
That drives me crazy,
That sets me free,
I need you here,
I won't let it be,
You're the only one I need.
Well, part of this sounds like a song I know.
But other than that, it's great.
You express your love beautifully, it would be even better if in your own words.
3/5