Comments : A new beginging........

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I loved this one like I've loved all your others :) Chaining the beast within is hard and painful and keeping it chained is even harder, you expressed it wonderfully :) One thing though, through the whole poem you wrote "form" where it should be "from" other then that is was fantastic :) 5/5 and hope to see more from you in the future :)
    ~*Rhea*~