Bravo. :)
I love the message in this one, so true. You just need to be yourself.
The flow seemed to be a tad off in a few places, but overall, you did a fantastic job. Keep writing! 5.5

- Stephyy <3

Very Cute! It has a great message!

Wow. i loved it, it was amazingly written. i will put you in my fave's, this poem was well thought of and the message came across so clear. well done. 5/5

I like it

Loved it girl

Its very true.
It happens to so many people.
they think they have to lie to keep friends when the reality is.. if you lie you lose friends.

it was a good poem.
and made a wonderful poiint.
keep it up.
xoxo
--Chelsey