Sam I Am (1989-2005)

by Elizabeth   Aug 3, 2007


Here I am,
Sam I am,
holding my sisters hand.

Here I am,
Sam I am,
standing on sacred land.

Here I am,
Sam I am,
engraved on marbled sand.

Here I am,
Sam I am,
walking with God hand in hand.

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Beautiful...5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Such a sad, emotional yet touching poem. I loved the style of this. 5/5, Em xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This was wonderful, I love the style.. Keep on keeping on... :)
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by kate

    This was beautiful.
    I liked how it was simple honestly, it doesn't actually tell a story of what really happened to Sam but it did tell it as being around then passing away. you did an amazing job and im sorry about your lost.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    There's no purpose in changing an already simple and effective structure, which is what you had to start with. It's fine the way it is.

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