.."for my heart is in you and forever it shal remain"
i see faith and i see hope...
a beautiful and brilliant piece of art..amazing poem..loved it .

~Wake~

Great poem.
Full emotions.

" to the deepest parts of my heart
a place no other has gone to before "

I love those lines.
Great piece of writing.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Another great write Tracy D, lots of emotion again
keep em coming I enjoy your work.

This reminded me of some versus from the bible or something - not just because of the language, but because it talks of leading stray people to a true and loving heart... and protecting them from the darkness. Was lovely.

(ps - you've writen "alway" instead of "away" in there somewhere... I think anyway - have a look).

Mo

So beautifully written love poem, very emotional.
My favorite lines are:
-stand tall I say this love I giveth to you
keep it close and never let it go
for my heart is in you and forever it shall remain.-
Whole piece is flawless.
5/5 from me

I love how it has this old english feel to it, it makes it....idk, usually love poems are very generic but your choise of words gives it a very unique twist, keep up the good work