Awwwwwwwww thats cute this one made me cry

Omg this poem kept me on the edge of my seat i felt all the emotions and it was amazing how you made it all connect and wrok out it was a story but yet a poem , well 4 poems great job i loved it you deffinately have a talent girl

5/5
laura

I think they're great.. if maybe they were seperated. Some of them are really great, like the second one could be a poem alone, just with a little more work. The third part doesnt really go with the poem. The first and last would make a really great poem just the two put together. Altogether i loved the rhymes, you're really tallented.

I swear I almost cried. I'm SO glad you ended it the way you did. I would've cried. . . This was sooooooo SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO amazing. Not even amazing. This is way better. . . WOW.