by aDORKable x3 Aug 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
[Chorus] |
by Michelle18
This is a great song...i love the word choice and it flowed beautifully......i dont know if i could see this as a song though..it sounds more like a poem to me...but maybe thats just me...i wish i could hear the music... but i still give you a 5/5 |
Amazing song. I absolutly loved your word choice and this song is filled with so much emotion. I can definitly imagine this being sung. ((Hint hint :P)) 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
I love it =) If you ever record this I would love to listen to it! =) I think it was a really great poem/song. Keep up the good work. |
by Nix
This poem is greatly written. It really deserves 5/5. Topic is excellent and atmosphere that you created is simply amazing. It really deserves 5/5 |
by Amberinaa
BEAUTIFUL;; |