by luv Shelbz luv Aug 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I am trapped in my own |
by Chelsey
I love how you ended every stanza. |
Like that too |
by Debbie
The opening and closing stanzas tug my heart completely: they ring a bell with me. Bittersweet. |
by Fsams
Great poem, I like the way you have written it with a good word choice and a beautiful flow. 5/5 for the emotions :) |