I really like this powm its great and so powerful 5/5

Interesting poem. Enjoyed reading it. Keep it up your good work..

Nazeer

Excellent metaphorical content. I loved the way words strung each other and how you have written it. :) 5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams

Very deep, touching and excellently written. I especially like the ending, it is powerful and so positive. The wording is great, but the flow of the poem is a little off sometimes.
Anyway, great job on this one, it deserves 5/5

I don't like the second stanza but rest are great. This poem has three mistakes, second stanza destroys a flow, this poem is hard to read because every stanza has many lines and if you can make this poem little shorter atmosphere will be a more powerful. Anyway this is very deep poem and some lines are incredible.

Its long but very mournful. Th eword choice is good and the whole poem is well put together. Keep it up

Tc
Fsams

Wow, great depth in this poem. I love the concept nad the ending was perfect. The title is great too, it's why I chose to read it. :] Wonderful choice of words as well. 5/5 Great write.

marcella

This is a beautiful poem that shows a lot of hope at the end! Really good for cheering someone up wen they feelin dwn!5/5

Aisha

Wow...really great! I would try to put into words how beautiful and moving I thought this piece was, but from my lips ( or through my fingers lol) cannot come words to convey such spledid ability, such wonderful talent. So, instead of saying so, I will merely say...
"Thank You"