Andrew
Wow ! What a deep and intense piece. The emotion in this write are awesome.

forever marks the end
of all i can remember
but i can only pray
that this is my december

This stanza is great.
Take care Cindy

The emotion is amazing. It's really cool because I can relate to it and felt everything. I usually comment to people how their rhymes are forced, but surprisingly yours were not and just flowed beautifully. Well done :)
5/5

Wow. that was so deep, it was very intense, i loved it great work 5/5