My One Last Friend

by Marc Ortiz   Aug 4, 2007


I'm sitting alone in the darkness
Wondering why it all happened..
My dear friends betrayed me, abandoned me..
God, why did you forsake me in this hell..

My guardian angel once told me,
That she will be here when I'm down.
But she's not here beside me,
She left me without saying goodbye.

"Princess where are you..?
..I will die without your love.."
Did she forsake me in this cold life?
Someone please tell me that I'm dreaming..

My pathetic life, crippled by the pain within..
The agony inside me is tormenting my heart..
No one is here.. to comfort me..
I.. am.. No one in this world.

But why.. Why did everyone forsake me?
My angel, you promised me that you'll enlighten my path.
My love, you told me that you'll keep me warm from my cold life.
But where are you now? Gone - like the wind I cannot see you..

I look around and tears run down from my dejected eyes..
No one is here.. I'm alone in this frigid room
Why did this happen.. Someone please end my life..
I close my eyes and wished that I'd die..

When I opened my eyes I saw someone standing in front of me..
I asked, "Are you here to kill me?"
He smiled and replied, "No.. I'm here for you."
I came closer to him.. I reached out my hand..

..Suddenly.. I realized that he was just my reflection.

(Sorry if it's not 'good' I have a writer's block.. - I lost my inspiration to write poems..)

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  • 15 years ago

    by BrittBaby aka wonderwoman

    U should never think ur poems r no good u write some of the best poems iv ever read keep writin xox ps 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Wow,that was so sad and touchable..I did like the direct way u wrote ur poem,it could get through me..loved it a lot
    Good job,keep it up:) and wish u all the best.

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxUNOxXx

    Oh wow! That's all I can say. This is an amazing poem. I love it even though it's a sad poem. I love the first stanza the most, it's kina edgy and amazing. Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by SAINTS MATE

    Hey this is a gud poem.... it's ok.... i had writers block to .... all my poems had a meaning but some of them dnt any more... you shud reali read my poems and comment on them... i hope you like em if you do read em... mwa thanks and its a good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    This was absolutely brilliant
    you must have some awesome writers block to come up with something like this
    great work nonethless and I do look forward to reading more of your work:)
    Take care and God bless
    Lisa