I have to say that I agree with the other readers that this poem is absolutely heart wrenching. I think that you are being VERY modest about your writers block by the way, you seem to be thriving in the pain and heartache, if it was a personal experience that is...Well, great job and please, keep writing! 5/5 xXxUnattractive1xXx

Are you kidding that is one of the best poems ive ever read, very good and emotional the words you use have such detail its like seeing what your experiencing keep it up!

A good write but seems a little redundant in word choice. you say forsake like 4 times throughout.
it is a wrencher though. also your tense fluctuates.
overall a nice read.

(:

A wonderfull poem, good choice of words and the emothion really dose penitrate the flow is a little off in my opinion except for this it's a very good poem and I will give credit where credit is due.

It was so sorrowful and I think you really passed that writers block..Because it is wonderful...so emotional and I like how you do it with stories

Good job
Take care,
Laura

This was okay: it's a fine attempt to break the block. I liked the seeming plaintive ambiance and melancholic tone of voice for enhancing the whole poem. They definitely drew out the emotions well. On the other hand, I firmly believed that the flow needs improvement. Perhaps tightening-up the lines will--in my humblest opinion--augment the flow? Nevertheless, I'll give you my props for expressing yourself well. All the best.

This poem is really sad...its like i could feel your pain throughout this piece... i dont think you lost your inspiration to write poems because this one is truely amazing...i dont see any improving that needs done to this. excellent job! i definately give you a 5/5 .. you deserve it.

This poem is excellent. Sad though. Your pain really hit me in this poem. The flow was choppy in parts, I guess you can work on that, but you had writers block so I understand.
5/5

-Shannon <3

ARE YOU KIDDING I LOVED IT especially

My guardian angel once told me,
That she will be here when I'm down.
But she's not here beside me,
She left me without saying goodbye.

its sad and yet touching this stanza was pt in the right place

you poem had an overall good flow and the not rhyming thing works for you

i give it 5/5

Really good poem. very emotional..and i can so relate to it. 5/5.

xxMandaxx

I can really feel the sadness and pain in this piece..great job!

Wow now that was amazing, really kept my intrest, the word choice was brillant, and the emotion was strong, and deep, well written poem 5/5

I loved it because I could feel that it came from your heart.
Beautiful =)
5/5

"When I opened my eyes I saw someone standing in front of me..
I asked, "Are you here to kill me?"
He smiled and replied, "No.. I'm here for you."
I came closer to him.. I reached out my hand..

..Suddenly.. I realized that he was just my reflection."

What an ending!!!
I never saw that coming, i must admit and for someone with writers block, that is one helluva great poem!
Very poignant with an amazing ending, nice message within the words
5/5 m'dear
*Gem*

Just Unbelievable! You had me in a dream world! 6/5

Not a good poem ! are you crazy?? that was one of the best poems ive ever read

Agree with alot of what the others said - really liked how you gave a slightly different aspect to the pain every time... and the ending provided hope... good balance. Keep it up

Wow. That was breathtaking. I loved the end line...you never realize that you are your own best friend. Although sometimes you can be your own enemy too. But great job with the poem, for me the meaning was understood in the beginning but towards the end it got more in depth. Great job!
5/5

Amber...

'sorry If its not 'good...'

Your just joking right? I mean wow, Your an amazing writer and you should never give rwrting up (just in case you have thoughts of it LOL) Your amazing and have a true talent and you should let it shine ^^ xxxxxx Much love from Roxy ^^ xxx

And you call it "writer's block"?
it's so sad it made me cry...
i never liked a poem that much...(though people here write really well...)

i'm trying to look at the flow and see what i can say about your poem, but my only words are "wow..."
i'm trembling, while writing this comment...
the imagery of it is so good i could picture myself in it...
great job...
5/5
*isabel*