Loved the poem. it had all the emotion that it needed and you conveyed what you felt i believe. its so sad and touching i know what its like as well.
5/5

Daniel

No no no...this is very excellent! how amazing work or urs.. ilove the whole stanza it was perfectly great expressing ur thoughts. i really like the message u have put in here.. it was very touching piece and u have a great imagery. u really deserve to have 5/5 i was enjoyed and very impressive! thanks for sharing and keep on writing u really have the talent to show w/us

God bless!

Wowness,that was realy gr8 verry deep n yeah can reali relate to it!!!!

Wow i think this is really really cool..its better than anything ive ever written...=D

Wow i think this is really really cool..its better than anything ive ever written...=D

I think it's wonderful..love the way u can express it

Wow that was amazing, I dont think you had a writers block when you wrote this poem because it was great :)

Great poem- alot of emotion which makes for a great write. 5/5

This was absolutely brilliant
you must have some awesome writers block to come up with something like this
great work nonethless and I do look forward to reading more of your work:)
Take care and God bless
Lisa

Hey this is a gud poem.... it's ok.... i had writers block to .... all my poems had a meaning but some of them dnt any more... you shud reali read my poems and comment on them... i hope you like em if you do read em... mwa thanks and its a good poem

Oh wow! That's all I can say. This is an amazing poem. I love it even though it's a sad poem. I love the first stanza the most, it's kina edgy and amazing. Keep up the good work.

Wow,that was so sad and touchable..I did like the direct way u wrote ur poem,it could get through me..loved it a lot
Good job,keep it up:) and wish u all the best.

U should never think ur poems r no good u write some of the best poems iv ever read keep writin xox ps 5/5