iM SORRY YOUR GIRL LEFT YOU BUT I'M SURE YOU WILL FIND SOMEONE WHO WILL BRING BACK THAT LOVE IN YOUR LIFE. GREAT POEM AND I GIVE IT A 5. IF YOU GET A CHANCE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF MINE. GREAT JOB. =)

this is a very good poem keep up the good work. sorry bout your ex. :(

Great piece of writing for sure... can definnitely relate to that someone-just-died feeling that comes with a break up