I love this poem very dark but very deep great job expressing all the emotions keep it up!!very sad

5/5
laura

This was really sad. I'm actually close to tears here. You put a lot of emotion and feeling into this and I really enjoyed reading it. It kept me captivated from the beginning to the end. The flow was wonderful also. The only thing I would suggest is that you add a little more to it, so that I can read more. lol. Keep writing.

Good Job on this! Another one of your best poems! 5/5

Good,full of so much emotion.

Loved the repetition of the line "don't let me fall for nothing." Beautiful.