A cynical, amusing, depressing, sad, and Brilliant foray into language, meaning, metaphor and truly imaginative poetic possibility......serves as a piece of proof, itself, that all May Not be lost..
I am fast becoming one of your fans...

This is a really interesting poem!
it has hidden meanings in the way you used your words...

like this phrase

"The ocean will continue to produce chocolate
and the cliff will continue to be made of marshmallow"

its really good...
thanks for the comment on my poem