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by Wake Aug 4, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
For the sake of the memories, greet the open wounds , let them bleed. And as you grasp for air in the dark, i'll slowly let you free. So you can breathe this open air as much as you want till tonight, 'Cause when these clouds sing again , we'll be taking our last ride. I know the waters never deep enough to drown all your sorrows in. So let the raindrops fall all down and fill it up again. We'll dive in as one you'll never come to know what hit you ... so hold on if you feel like letting go . . .------------------------------------- Written by Wake
by Hebe
Great poem. Nice flow and word choice. " I know the waters never deep enough to drown all your sorrows in. So let the raindrops fall all down and fill it up again. " My favourite stanza, really great. Really enjoyed reading it. Love your work. Take care