As I Slip Away Unnoticed

by SuicideNotes2Poems   Aug 4, 2007


My life i a lie
and nobody knows the truth
about my tears and cries
or about the scars of my youth
about the sadness that i hide
or my emptiness inside
about my suicide notes
or the sorrow in my eyes

if you took some time
and looked at me
even a blind man could see
that my sad world is going down
crushing me into the ground
i feel lower than dirt
god i dread this feeling
depression is taking over
my fate is sealing

Ricky

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  • 17 years ago

    by Woe

    You should read my poem its called my heart is crashing.. i think you'd like it. =) i love this one and all of the others ive read of yours so far.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jade

    I love your writings. I could re-read them a million times. I hope you write more..

    If your feeling what your writing I hope you cheer up little buddy.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jade

    I love your writings. I could re-read them a million times. I hope you write more..

    If your feeling what your writing I hope you cheer up little buddy.

    If you ever need to talk you can add me on msn or email me.

    jade_nicoletemple@hotmail.com

  • 17 years ago

    by Jade

    I love your writings. I could re-read them a million times. I hope you write more..

    If your feeling what your writing I hope you cheer up little buddy.

    If you ever need to talk you can add me on msn or email me.

    jade_nicoletemple@hotmail.com

  • 17 years ago

    by Jade

    I love your writings. I could re-read them a million times. I hope you write more..

    If your feeling what your writing I hope you cheer up little buddy.

    If you ever need to talk you can add me on msn or email me.

    jade_nicoletemple@hotmail.com

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