This is goodbye

by Broken Angel   Aug 4, 2007


I'm sitting in my room
With my razor blade
Waiting for the right moment
For my life to fade

My life is totally screwed up
I don't know what went wrong
All i ever wanted was
To feel that i belong

Mom and dad, I'm sorry
For all I've put you through
But i am not that girl anymore
That innocent girl you knew

My life changed the minute
I got onto that plane
I left everything behind
All i feel now is pain

I'm sorry if i couldn't
Make you oh so proud
I tried really hard
But i wasn't good enough

So i guess this is goodbye
Thanks for all your love
Plz know that i love you
And I'll watch you from up above...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Really good job! I loved the emotion in this poem. It flowed really well! Keep up the amazing work!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kylie

    I loved the last two lines of this poem, they really added a lot to it. Great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by lokighost

    Aww that how i felt some years ago well some times still do but i never gived up

    love your work girl so keep it up

    thats a big 5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion

    Hey there, i love it!! it's really good

  • 17 years ago

    by LovelyDivine

    This was great.
    reminded me of my poem "Pain"
    great job. 5/5
    keep it up

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