That was sad. I have felt some thing almost like that before.

Dont do it.your my friend and i love you as a friend.

Great poem , well written and very sad, it is sad to think that the blade helps, but in real life it only causes more pain to you and the ones that love and care about you, anyway great write, keep it up,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Omg that was good. i have one like it but it is called suiside. keep writing :)

This was great.
reminded me of my poem "Pain"
great job. 5/5
keep it up

Hey there, i love it!! it's really good

Aww that how i felt some years ago well some times still do but i never gived up

love your work girl so keep it up

thats a big 5/5 from me

I loved the last two lines of this poem, they really added a lot to it. Great work.

Really good job! I loved the emotion in this poem. It flowed really well! Keep up the amazing work!
5/5