Comments : Sunshine

  • 17 years ago

    by Dan

    Not bad lol maybe even a bit funny

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was quite a sweet piece of poetry you have written. I truely enjoyed this from start to finish and didn't see anything what so ever wrong with it. A cute love poem written beautifully by you. Keep up the good work. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Nicely done..keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    What a loving poem for such a dear friend.