by Dan
Not bad lol maybe even a bit funny |
by Melpomene
This was quite a sweet piece of poetry you have written. I truely enjoyed this from start to finish and didn't see anything what so ever wrong with it. A cute love poem written beautifully by you. Keep up the good work. ~mel |
by Veamm
Nicely done..keep it up |
by OHgreenman
What a loving poem for such a dear friend. |