Nice poem lots of pplz can relate to not being loved or wanted good job but it was missing that pizzaz 4/5

Desperation
I hate it
Just live your life dear
Life is wonderful
seasons do change but not to worry
If winter comes can spring be far behind

i hope you live a happy life
enjoy
tc
5/5 for it
I saw your poem on discussion board but I don believe in deals.Its upto you youw anna read or not It wont afect our friendship.
your new friend
Rohan

And i am crazy about Figure skating ^_^

So much emotion in this little poem. It's so depressing,but you wrote it beautifully. The rhymes and flow are flawless. Great write! 5/5

marcella

Beautifully written poem you have obviously been through a lot in you’re life so far and I hope it gets better for you. We have 2 eyes 2 ears 2 legs 2 arms but only 1 heart don’t die and leave someone with out a soul mate remember in the bad times if you died the would be at least one person out there devastated.

This peice was deep. You could feel the desperation coursing through each word.
The ending was shocking to me, and better than the one I last read.
I enjoyed this peice.
Well done,
Elaine.

Good job. again ii know exactly how you feel. i am totally going through this right now. but again great job and keep it up. and if you need anyone to talk to feel free to talk to me

I like how the poems of yours I have read just now are short but hold such much emotion in them it's really beautiful. I'm sure many people can relate to this piece in there own way so your not only writing for you, you writing for other people. altogether this was an enjoyable read. I didn't get bored what so ever. Keep up the good work~mel

Great poem.. you can really feel the emotion. also well written.. and thanks for the comments they mean a lot. keep up the great writing 5\5

WOW, this poem is verystrongly worded, and exactly how i feel sometimes too... very nicely done!

WOW, this poem is verystrongly worded, and exactly how i feel sometimes too... very nicely done!

Excellent!

Sometimes being lonely leads to something right..i mean it can make stronger and you can do things with no expectations from your so called-friends..
honestly i suffered with this dilemma but as times pass by and more friends coming..i survive and i realize being such a jerk is not easy..

keep it up!

It's short but you potray the emotion so perfectly... Very interesting interpretation of the emotion.. :) 5/5!

That's so sad.. O_O yes..

"There's no one in the world
That wants me around,
Everyone wishes I was dead."

i usually feel that too.. especially at home -_-

anyway, nice work :D keep it up!!