Loves War

GREAT poem... The way this was written worked so well. The flow was flawless, the word choice was great, and the concept had me wanting more! 5/5 for another great write!

Good poem..not your best but not your worse either. i was expecting more out of the ending...but still 4/5

Im not sure that i like this poem as much as i did your other ones. At first it was alright, the middle was good, and the end wasn't that good. I didnt think that the ending was powerful enough for the poem. but it really has some great potential, maybe just spend a little more time on it! don't let it get you down. keep on writing! :]

I like this. Short and full of meaning.
This was a nice meaning and I like how
you use love and war to convey your
thoughts well done.
5/5
<3tay

Im not really sure if i like this poem. but i guess its only because i dont like how it flows.