Awesome poem,really good flow to it.
a suggestion though,maybe you should find a better way to end it.That's the only part I thought was a little off.Still a great poem.
5/5,keep up the good work,
Miranda

Not the best of your poems.. this only alryt.. i didn't feel any emotions.. the title was rather interesting.. you should've expressed yourself a little more for this poem... =]

This whole poem is confusing. It all looks like a list of words with no real connection. I can't really understand this, but I'm sure there's a hidden meaning in it. I'll have to give it a 3/5

Im not really sure if i like this poem. but i guess its only because i dont like how it flows.

I like this. Short and full of meaning.
This was a nice meaning and I like how
you use love and war to convey your
thoughts well done.
5/5
<3tay

Im not sure that i like this poem as much as i did your other ones. At first it was alright, the middle was good, and the end wasn't that good. I didnt think that the ending was powerful enough for the poem. but it really has some great potential, maybe just spend a little more time on it! don't let it get you down. keep on writing! :]

Good poem..not your best but not your worse either. i was expecting more out of the ending...but still 4/5

GREAT poem... The way this was written worked so well. The flow was flawless, the word choice was great, and the concept had me wanting more! 5/5 for another great write!