by Lonely Little Dreamer Aug 4, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Loose actions bring filth and decay, |
One word wowthatwasamasing |
by GoodMEMORIES
I LOVED IT............. |
Wow, greatly written dark poem, with powerful message. You created amazing, dark atmosphere through the piece, which is very effective. |
by JaMeS
This is a good poem it has meaning my only bug with it if im honest is that it didnt have more flow i think this was the best part of the poem and i wish its energy was throughout |
Oh wow...just...Wow. lol. I LOVED it. I love how you put the girl in as she was being sort of tortured in her own regret in front of a jury type of thing. Very nice imagination. =P |