Shrouded in gloom

by ben thompson   Aug 4, 2007


Shrouded in gloom
Souls sad demise
depression runs rampant
deep sorrowful eyes

Shrouded in gloom
Thoughts running black
Idea of suicide loom
No turning back

Shrouded in gloom
By myself I bleed
Dizziness sets in
Lost in my disease

Shrouded in gloom
young life wasted
Fruit of experience
none ever tasted

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kellie

    WOW this is brilliant writing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by natalie

    Hi this is a brilliant poem keep up gd wrk

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Well..well you the words buddy..nice job..no comment at all..5/5 for it..keep it up..read my piece too if you have the time^^

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Short bursting lines....to the point and deep....very nice!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    What a deep powerful piece you have penned. The imagery is very dark and intense.

    Shrouded in gloom
    By myself I bleed
    Dizziness sets in
    Lost in my disease

    These lines really cut deep into the soul.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

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