Ben
What a deep powerful piece you have penned. The imagery is very dark and intense.

Shrouded in gloom
By myself I bleed
Dizziness sets in
Lost in my disease

These lines really cut deep into the soul.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Short bursting lines....to the point and deep....very nice!

Well..well you the words buddy..nice job..no comment at all..5/5 for it..keep it up..read my piece too if you have the time^^

Hi this is a brilliant poem keep up gd wrk

WOW this is brilliant writing 5/5