by luv Shelbz luv Aug 4, 2007
category :
Special events /
other poems
Up to bat |
by Chelsey
It was different, I dont see many poems like it. |
Good poem. Very unique and I love how it is different. I already knew you loved softball but I didn't think you'd write a poem about it :P. I loved the onomateopias(sound words like whoosh) in it as well. |
by LiNa
Love softball so i loved the poem love you |
by Debbie
Such a succinct depiction of a softball game. The use of certain sounds and actions definitely brought fair justice with this piece. Pretty. |
by Fsams
Unique and the flow is great and fun. The way words strung makes it a cohesive poem. 5/5 all the way |