by x Mo x
In the last stanza first line I think you meant "were" instead of "where." |
by TillyMariex
Wow. i think i said wow on evry poem of yours that i commented. u deserve all the wows in tha world. <333 |
by Nix
Beautiful ending, you described emotions wonderfully. You used -word- and -words- too many times. Anyway great piece, third stanza is my favorite. It is really deep and emotional. It deserves 5/5 |