by Hannah Emellia Aug 5, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
When the irksome light of daybreak, |
by Jaymes Haze
You're love affair with sleep runs deep it seems. |
by Nix
Great poem. Ending is fantastic and this poem has powerful atmosphere. You described emotions excellently. It deserves 5/5 |
by x Mo x
WoW! That was so great! It flowed so well and it kept a steady beat. "Nightly torments" that sent slight chills down my spine. The idea is very very original, and the way you formed it made it even better! Keep it up! |