WoW! That was so great! It flowed so well and it kept a steady beat. "Nightly torments" that sent slight chills down my spine. The idea is very very original, and the way you formed it made it even better! Keep it up!

~Mo~

Great poem. Ending is fantastic and this poem has powerful atmosphere. You described emotions excellently. It deserves 5/5

You're love affair with sleep runs deep it seems.

I remember when I was liked that, I enjoyed living in my dreams much more than the rest of my life.