I think you did a really good job at this poem. It is so cute, I love it. Keep it up

Jess

I love this///omg 5/5

WoW! so true:) to get the right words!

Great job.. i loved it! so true, and im sure that so many people could relate to it. I think that the ending could be a little stronger, but it worked and got the point across. You have such powerful poems that are full of meaning and hope. it was another amazing write by the one and only Damont! keep up the freaking awesome work! :D