Lost Inside

by S R P   Aug 5, 2007


Into this emptiness I peer
Numb inside, I feel no fear.
Life goes on outside of me
Though my soul is empty.

War rages inside of my dreams,
Waking up to terrified screams.
My heart desperately cries out
Throwing my mind into doubt.

Never ending, time goes on
Though my life is too foregone
Never seeing outside of this haze
I find naught but an empty gaze.

Inside of this labyrinth, forever lost
My meaningless efforts are exhaust
Never finding what is truly there
This life has caught me unaware.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem i really liked this one. keep up the good work ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    That was great.

    War rages inside of my dreams,
    Waking up to terrified screams.
    My heart desperately cries out
    Throwing my mind into doubt.

    ^^this part of the poem shows confusion and fear^^ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    I really like this piece. It is SO filled with emotion and I absolutly love that! I can tell you put alot of yourself into this piece. And i am very glad you did because it def payed off! You have an excellent piece here. Love it! You are very talented...anytime you want me to take a look at your work, just pm me!
    Take care,
    Loni

  • 16 years ago

    by Kellie

    It's great, I love the words and rhymes you've used to make it flow so well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow.. great poem.. i loved it .. the flow was awesome.. pretty sad tho..it sort of somehow,reached it.. truly felt ..

    keep it up

    ~Wake~

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