Omg how sad and great poem.... i like the way u put it like how it was ur story and stuff thats smart. Well keep up the good work<3

Are you talking to your self again?

Excellent story line with a twist at the end.
Great flow and rhyme also job well done and
Thank you for sharing and Write On,
Bogie

That was a sad and touching write ,very beautifully done.It left a tear in my eye.

Wow. this one was great. and i really liked the way you ended it. it was beautifully written.

GreaT poeM andD iT soundeD verY sweeT. KeeP uP thE gooD writinG and worK.

luzaN