Doubted Faith

Simple yet a good write. I love the meaning behind this. The word choice is good and the rhyming wasnt forced. 5/5
Don't you love me enough to fight?
for my love and for my life?
Love these lines ^^
~ Lainey

Wow.. this poem is different from most I have seen from you too, Elaine. It was full of anger, confusion, sadness, pain... A girl confused on whether a guy had just been lying to her, loving another girl, and it's all overwhelming to her. In some ways I can connect to this, but only because I have experienced something similar to this before.

5/5 <3

~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

Use of the lexis is good and the structure is also good. Of course there is room for improvement in this piece. I like the flow and the way you have strung the words. keep it up

I thought you said you would be true?
Love me till I died, and never make me cry!?
^I don't like this stanza. Every line except ^ that two lines is written excellently. Ending is very effective! First and fourth stanza are my favorite ones. Atmosphere of this piece is great. 5/5

....OMG.....I love this. There really is alot of meaning behind it. And I can Relate to it.I love how it was short, but got to the point of what you were talking about. I LOVE IT. 5/5 :)

~Raven