Hmm I think that last stanza sounds a little off with the and been set free. I don't understand this line: You can it |
by Mousie
This was very good, good wording and good write. wonderful job. |
by Vodka
Wonderful. all it took was one word! |
by Alissa
This was a great poem, I liked how the rhymes were flawless, yet the flow was a bit off on the third stanza, but it was still great. I really enjoyed it, great job! |
by Nix
I don't like last stanza but flow of rest of this poem is excellent. You described emotions greatly. 5/5 |
I really adore how you put the words all together. This is another one great poem. I really loved every lines and the sway of flow. Another job well done. |