by Wake Aug 5, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Before i let you Go, |
Aw so sad, I bet this poems always gets people thinking though. I bet it makes them think of someone they have lost and wish they haven't. Actually thats what i thought when reading this. I wish i could turn back time and change the past so i could be with someone i still love :P Nice that you can get your poem to make people think and relate to it. Just some missing words are in your poem. I would look back carefully and see if you can find them. Other than that its perfect ^_^ 5/5 Wonderful poem! :) |
Great poem ,well written and vocabulary was great. very sad write , but as always you did a good job on it, keep it up, your friend Tracy d........5/5 |
by Hebe
Beautiful poem. |
by Marc Ortiz
A well written piece you have here. Flow was smooth, well done. I like the message portrayed in this poem. I have one suggestion though.. Capitalize the I's =) |
by Emma
5/5 nice job . sad but i liked the poem alot:) |