Before i let you go ..

by Wake   Aug 5, 2007


Before i let you Go,
just give me one more try
to tell you why,
of the way i feel.

Just want to let you know
all my dreams will collide if
you will subside it
and dont show what you conceal.

I like it when the wind
blows through your hair.
And when it falls down on your face
and shines all your grace.
Do you know what it means
to me to wake up in your air
next to you everyday
i thought I'd never let it fade.

Its a different kind of pain
when I'm staring in your eyes
and find there's nothing left here to see.
When blood's rolling in your vein,
but stops t realize
The heart is no more where it should be...

If i had one more day,
i wish that i could turn back time
and do what i should have done.
To let you slip away
is like the pain of every night
i spent alone, put into one.

And if I'm making any sense
i wish you'd realize
without you everyday of my life , is the same..
And if it means anything,
i wish you knew i opened my eyes
but without I'm colorblind , again..

I like it when the light
glows above your head
and reflects all your beauty
radiating everywhere.
I like it when the night,
is dark and quite again.
with the two of us only,
forever there.

Its a different kind of pain
when you're so far away
but still here with me.
Living with your name
it wont ever go away
why dont you just come back to me..?

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Written by Wake

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  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Behaving

    Aw so sad, I bet this poems always gets people thinking though. I bet it makes them think of someone they have lost and wish they haven't. Actually thats what i thought when reading this. I wish i could turn back time and change the past so i could be with someone i still love :P Nice that you can get your poem to make people think and relate to it. Just some missing words are in your poem. I would look back carefully and see if you can find them. Other than that its perfect ^_^ 5/5 Wonderful poem! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem ,well written and vocabulary was great. very sad write , but as always you did a good job on it, keep it up, your friend Tracy d........5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Beautiful poem.
    Very emotional, sad.
    Flow is good.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    A well written piece you have here. Flow was smooth, well done. I like the message portrayed in this poem. I have one suggestion though.. Capitalize the I's =)

    Keep up the good work
    Thanks for the comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    5/5 nice job . sad but i liked the poem alot:)