by Marius Laun
That is really deep. Another hit, This is one that i like a lot, It is amazing , It paints just a neat picture, I was inspirining,Good work again |
by Roxiee An
You are a puppet controlled by your own mind |
by Sourav
It has a good flow so it's nice to read... good emotional write... keep it up! |
by Cella Bella
Nice poem! Wonderful rhymes and flow. I like the story in this poem. You really know how to pull a reader in. It was unique and pleasant to read. 5/5 |
by collin
Nice poem it flows well and you get a feeling of pain and regret as you read it very nice write :) keep it up girl |
by N.Lee
This is a good poem... really one of my FAVS. it is written to point out kinda like they loved you deep inside but didint let you know and now they are miserable and youve found out about there hiden love and your now trying to find them but they are hiding so much to the point that you stopped looking... (that's just how it seemed in my point of view) |
by N J Thornton
At the beginning, I liked it. But somewhere around the middle the flow went astray and it became "just another poem." Up to the fourth line I was really impressed, the meter was spot on, and the diction appropriate, but then it just slipped through the lines like melted butter. |
by Hebe
Great poem. |
//* Excellent poem. From start to finish you had me hooked and the poem was very neat which makes it look very professional,,* |
by JaMeS
Hey really nice poem you almost lost it in the middle but made up for that and more with the ending :) and pm me about this photoshop character drawing id like to see how it turned out jennifer :) |
by Sumit Ojha
Really nice poem... I like it :D |
by tears i cry
Very metophorical because we are all like puppets (isnt weird how when u describe a metaphor u have to use a simle)and we all have those stiches lol |
by Jenni Marie
I love this... |
You hide behind a thin black quilt |
by GoodMEMORIES
This poem was really deep. i think that it was pretty good. i really enjoyed it. |
by Brittany C
I like it. It has a nice flow to it and i loved the words that you used. 5/5 |
by Yeka
Awww dude love this poem truly wonderful (^_^) 5/5 |