Comments : All That Falls

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    From twisted vines to empty hearts
    And sanctuaries came and gone
    Nothing left but fatal starts
    And the sparrows falling; gone

    I love this stanza, it's my favorite. this poems was beautifully written, and the imagery was superb. Good read, great write.

  • 17 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Your pain is felt.

    thank you.