Love gave it a 5... |
by Dai
This is a great poem especially for someone our age. The theme is a relatively complex psychological concept and you got your message across in a very subtle way. The vocabulary is great because your words are simple but there’s an underlying sense of intelligence. I’m defiantly looking forward to some more works by you. You defiantly have talent and will be a great author. |
I really loved this ^_^ I completely understand what it feels like to bear the brunt of peoples harassment for being different =( It's not easy and more people need to read and this and understand what their words do ^_^ Fantastic job writing this and I wouldn't change a thing about it =) A well deserved 5 ^_^ |