I told you that you was an amazing writer/poet and this poem just proves it. Well done.

Sorry for this
I hope your life aint that bad
Take care sweety
I hope you get all the happiness in your life
I shall pray for you
your friend
Rohan

Very sad piece. Very heartfelt.
Nice job!
Take Care Cindy

A sad write, but still great. 5.5
But I have a question... is it true? I'm curious.
You're a fab-u-lous writer dollface. <3
Iloveyousomuch, my sexy beast. Rawr. :P

- Stephyy <3

Wow, this poem was very very good and written very nicely..its just ashame that it happened

Brooke<3

Beautiful, but sad...
5/5
i agree with everyone here, you are a wonderful writer.

Heartleft piece. It's horrible to know how many women are selling themselves to get enough money to just live, same time it's not a life. Touching.
I think it was just flawless piece!
5/5!

P.S I really hope that me part isn't true!

Is it rlly u
i rlly hope it isnt
u but i like the way
u stick up for her even though
her "job" isnt very sophisticated
nicely done

I thought this was both original and unique in concept, and beautifully written.
The flow was good throughout the piece, and though relatively short you managed to pack in so much depth and emotion.

Loved the ending, I found it to be very powerful and it's filled with such intensity that it hits the reader like a slap in the face.

Beautiful.

Oh,very sad, and i liked the ending alot